Chao- After finally being able to relax in the PnF world, Chao reviewed a few chapters from The Value of a Smile.... Don't really know how people could stand reading paragraph after paragraph of narration.
Agent Daisy- (shakes head in disappointment)
Chao- Hey! It seemed like a good idea at the time! Chao was able to create an atmosphere of what was happening by detailing the characters' actions and thoughts. Now Chao realizes that it's best to include space between paragraphs by adding dialogue and thinking bubbles. After all, comics involve speech and thoughts between panels of action. Readers just don't rely on pictures alone to tell them stories.
Agent Daisy- (rolls eyes)
Chao- Well, anyway, this author went back to fix some grammar mistakes (after learning a few rules in a grammar class) for The Value of a Smile and a few other PnF one shots. For future chapters of The Value of a Smile, Chao is hoping to continue this drama and psychological aftermath through more dialogue and thoughts to make the whole chapter seem more appealing. Dunno when the next chapter will be posted, but they are under work. In the meantime, hope you all will enjoy the upcoming one shot, Creativity from the Heart.
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